Thursday, 21 August 2014

Croquet, Lindy Hop and Other Stories - Interview with Alexis Deacon



At the recent Picture Book Retreat Anne-Marie Perks had the opportunity to work with and interview award winning author illustrator Alexis Deacon, here's what she found out.



I have to start this interview with introducing Alexis Deacon's work in Jim's Lion written by Russell Hoban. I don't think I can say it better than John Lloyd in his book review here. His word was jaw-dropping, mine would be surprising, awesome and I don't think it too much to say, spiritual. The words were few but no less impactful in combination with the visual sequences that immediately put us into Jim's inner world. It was only with the second or third read through that I realised the only thing we see is Jim's world. Not the nurse, the doctors or even his parents. The best thing I can say is, read it.



Alexis playing a bit of croquet at the Picture Book Retreat last July.

Alexis Deacon is perhaps best known for his picture book Beegu, a New York Times best illustrated book of the year and shortlisted for the Kate Greenaway medal. His first book Slow Loris was shortlisted for the Blue Peter Award, and he has had many other books since including another book written by Russell Hoban, Soonchild. In 2008, he was chosen by Booktrust as one of the ten best new illustrators of the last decade. Fabulous accolades no doubt and he is approachable and generous with his students on the Cambridge MA Children's Illustration course, fellow illustrators and writer illustrators.

Well, time to get on with our interview questions!

The Image above and the following two images compare the composition and image choices at dummy book level and final print spreads.



1. Anne-Marie: Do you consider yourself an illustrator or an author illustrator?
Alexis: I aspire to being a storyteller, through whatever medium, be it performance, spoken word, drawing, painting, writing, really whatever. Having said that, I think that the majority of my experience and expertise is in illustration.

2. Anne-Marie: You have an amazing understanding of visual storytelling, how did you develop that skill?

Alexis: Ever since I have been working in publishing I have been trying to teach myself about the process of telling stories through images. Initially it was just a case of trying lots of different solutions before one felt right for the particular task in hand. More recently I have been a little more systematic about it. When I look at an image I ask myself how I feel about it, what information it is conveying to me, then I ask myself what cues in the image might be prompting those feelings or what specific content is delivering that information. I am also very interested to know how other people perceive images, to see where we agree and where we differ. Through asking questions such as these, I believe it is possible to better understand how images can be used to tell a story. In any given story there will be a blend of fact and feeling and being able to work with these two strands is essential to getting the story across.

Alexis keeps sketchbooks going all the time, doing innumerable observational drawings that eventually feed into his visual storytelling.


3. Anne-Marie: Can you tell us a bit about your working process? How do you get started?
Alexis: My process varies but it boils down to something like this:
First I will have a thought, that thought will be vague and for the most part formless, but there will be something about it that excites me or moves me in some way. For a while it will just swim around in my head until I feel I can see how it might become a tale and especially how it might end. In the meantime I might have been drawing characters or recording scraps of dialogue. As soon as I have an ending, I know I have the potential for something that might become a story someone else would like to read. At that point I try and complete a script, or a very rough dummy if it is a comic or picture book, where the images are going to be carrying a lot of the weight. The purpose of this dummy is just to work out what will go where, at what size and what approximate shape. As far as possible I try to leave all of the fun parts of the drawings to the end, the artwork stage. If I am lucky enough to secure funding for the project from the dummy, I will go on to produce the artwork, matching the technique used to what I feel is appropriate for the requirements of that particular story and whenever possible using the earliest acceptable version to avoid overworking.



From observational drawings to setting and character exploration.

4. Anne-Marie: What is your usual medium, or do you use a variety?

Alexis: I think I slightly answered this in the previous question. I do like to chop and change. I prefer water based media as you can use several of them in the same image, taking advantage of their different strengths. The fact that they are water based rather than oil based means they dry quicker, are easier to clean up after and don't smell so much, all of which are important considerations when you work from home!




Rough drawing for print spread below from Jim's Lion.




5. Anne-Marie: In terms of approach, can you briefly discuss the differences in illustrating for different age groups and types of books?
Alexis: I believe the fundamental difference in illustrating for older children and adults is that you can rely on them having a certain level of experience of the world. The joy of writing for the very young is that you know they have a much narrower frame of reference so everything has to be much more distilled and direct. Also it is worth considering how they might relate it to the stuff they may recognise: school, family and so on.

6. Anne-Marie: Can you tell us about breaking into children's publishing and your journey - briefly? Was there a defining moment?
Alexis: I'm not sure that I have broken in! I have had several things published but breaking in implies that once you are over that line everything gets easier. Actually I have to work just as hard to get stories accepted now as when I was first starting out. My typical ratio is about four 'nos' to one 'yes' although one difference is that these days I can do my own 'nos' for the most part! My first book was published after I sent a series of book dummies to Caroline Roberts, who was then an editor at Random house. Each one was rejected but with a little advice alongside. I tried to take on board what was said and interpret it in my own way and eventually it paid off‚

Above and the following two images are from Jim's Lion, dummy roughs to final print.



7. Anne-Marie: Are you able to share any new titles or projects you are working on now?
Alexis: I'm trying to build up a body of work in comics at the moment. I have two graphic novel projects that I am working on. One, charting the fortunes of Mr Punch's second family is all written and illustrated in rough; the other, which is about a sorceress hired to find a worthy
successor to a famous chief, is about half done.

8. Anne-Marie: Tell us about your studio or work space(s).
Alexis: I work standing up on an architect's drawing board or sat on the sofa. Both are in my living room at home.








9. Anne-Marie: If you could sit down and have a cup of coffee or glass of wine with three living illustrators or author illustrators, whom you've not met yet, who would they be? Do you want to say why?
Alexis: Well Sendak and Steig died recently otherwise they would have been top of that list, I'm going to say Iain McCaig, Christophe Blain and Joann Sfar. Not sure we'd be able to understand one another but it would be fun trying. Iain McCaig I would want to meet for one book alone, which I looked at so many times when I was a boy that by now all the pages are loose inside. The book was called Casket of Souls. I still think it is pretty great if you are into Fantasy, which I am.

The other two are French comic artists and major influences for me over the last ten years. I've heard Joann Sfar talk a couple of times but never really met him. Christophe Blain has been a huge influence, especially his Isaac the Pirate books. I would dearly love to meet them both.

10. Anne-Marie: What's the one thing most people don't know about you?

Alexis: That I dance Lindy Hop in a troupe called the Rhythm Rascals? That I am a huge pro wrestling fan? That I am one of only one thousand people in the world to own 1/6 scale replica of Jabba's Palace?

Anne-Marie: (I know I said only 10 questions) Consider this a bonus question:
11. How does teaching illustration influence your own work?

Alexis: Probably this requires as long an answer as any I've given above but as it is the last one I shall be brief. Teaching has changed the way I think a great deal but two lessons stand out. I don't think you truly know what you believe until you try and explain it to someone else. Never stop learning from what is around you, especially other people. There is more to learn in this world than you could ever possibly hope to understand‚ and that's a good thing!

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Anne-Marie Perks is the Illustrator Coordinator of SCBWI British Isles.

Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Network News: On Teens, Treats and Peeking into Picture Books in Central North.



By Liz Miller

We’ve been a bit spoilt in recent months in Central North with not one, not two, but three visiting speakers who kindly agreed to come and share their expertise and work with us. First up were uber- experienced editors, Non Pratt and Emily Sharratt who came to talk to us about ‘How to Get Your Teen Novel Published’ as part of the Lincoln Inspired Festival. Except they didn’t just talk to us, they made us work as well!


Creating characters and voice 
Non and Emily contemplating what to ask us to do next.


Non spoke about creating characters and voice and then got us to do a couple of writing exercises to work out our own strengths and to help us to consider what we needed to be focussing on to create that all important ‘voice’.  Heads buzzing, Emily then moved onto plot and considered the narrative arc and journeying between each point of the arc before setting us another exercise. Heads whizzing, we moved onto themes and finding the ‘heart of a story’. Then, more writing but this time with a lucky dip bag!
Our thanks to Non and Emily for a thought provoking event. Yes we had to do our bit as well but we were all much the wiser for doing so. 


'Peek into Picture Books'

Our notebooks barely made it back into bags before we were welcoming our next visitor. This time it was our much anticipated ‘Peek into Picture Books’ with award-winning children’s illustrator, Lynne Chapman. Lynne is a member of our Lincoln SCBWI Facebook group and we were looking forward to meeting her in person. 
Lynne gave us an engaging, funny introductory talk about her journey to children’s book illustration. Essentially, her journey involved a lot of hard work, a touch of serendipity and holding a cat to ransom! Not a real cat you’ll be relieved to know and thankfully there was a happy ending to its briefly worrying predicament. 
Checking out Lynne's sketch books
Next, we moved over to the tables where Lynne had brought along a selection of early sketch sheets, roughs and finished artwork. She talked through the stages in her illustration process and we were soon poring over her work, fascinated by it and feeling very privileged to get such a treat! Lynne told us that one of the ways she keeps her illustration work fresh is by sketching outdoors, for the fun of drawing. So after a brief pause for lunch, we had more treats looking through her sketchbooks and her impressively light (and very ingenious) sketch kit. I wish I’d remembered to take a picture of her sketch kit though I did jot down its components! 
From sketch sheet to finished art work 
You can learn all about Lynne and her work from her website and blog; both are a treasure trove of insights, illustrations, sketches and generously shared resources. But in Central North, we feel rather fortunate to have had a closer peek.  Thank you for sharing your journey and work with us Lynne!

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Liz Miller joined SCBWI in 2010. She likes to make lists and is one of life’s volunteers.  When she is not making lists and volunteering for things, she writes picture books. Her picture book Farm Zoo Hullaballoo was Commended at the Winchester Writers’ Conference this year, which made her very happy!

Tuesday, 19 August 2014

Proofreading Tips: Fumblerules

Catriona Tippin

It’s the silly season, here’s some grammatical nonsense. 

This list includes some favourites from collections by G Trigg, a science editor, and W Safire, a grammarian (who gave these rules their name). 

Fumblerules are self-explanatory, work out what’s going on with this Top Twenty: 


1. Don’t use no double negatives. 

2. Verbs has to agree with their subjects. 

3. Join clauses and an appropriate conjunction. 

4. About sentence fragments. 

5. Mixed metaphors are a pain in the neck to be weeded out. 

6. You should not use a big word when a diminutive one would suffice. 

7. Don’t use commas, when unnecessary. 

8. Parenthetical words however should be enclosed in commas. 

9. Don’t overuse exclamation marks!!! 

10. Its important to check apostrophes and confirm whether each one occupies it’s position correctly. 

11. Eschew obfuscation. 

12. Don’t abbrev. 

13. The passive voice should rarely be employed. 

14. On the subject of repetition, the repetition of a word may be effective repetition or it may be ineffective repetition. 

15. It behooves us all to avoid archaic expressions. 

16. Consult the dictionery to avoid misspellings. 

17. As far as incomplete constructions, they are wrong. 

18. In my opinion, a writer should definitely not get into the somewhat tedious habit of making use of too many superfluous words that are unnecessary in order to put his or her meaning or message across, as it were. 

19. Check to see if you any words out. 

20. Last but not least, avoid clichés like the plague.


Catriona Tippin aka @ProofReadingTip will be back next month with more proofreading tips. 

To see previous tips, click on this proofreading link.



Catriona Tippin has been a member of SCBWI since 2006 and helps organise venues for SCBWI North East. Details of her writing and illustrating here. She proofreads study guides, house magazines and publicity material for two national educational charities, in addition to working on a variety of proofreads and copyedits for the growing self-published world. Her monthly column is intended to give you food for thought, remembering “Any correction of the speech or writing of others will contain at least one grammatical, spelling or typographical error” (McKean’s Law, named after its inventor Erin McKean, editor of the Oxford American Dictionary). 

Monday, 18 August 2014

Ten-Minute Blog Break - 19th August

August is one of those rare times of the year when living Down South seems like a disadvantage, as the various Edinburgh festivals take centre-stage. I'm hoping this isn't the last year that this cultural smorgasbord is held in the United Kingdom!

The SCBWI South East Scotland regional team were particularly busy at the Edinburgh Book Festival, organising a panel on author events with Nicola Morgan as one of the speakers. Nicola's terrific blog post on getting and giving great author events covers everything she talked about and a lot lot more.

Maureen Lynas was also in Edinburgh last week, indulging her inner artist and soaking up as much inspiration as possible. And because she's nice like that, she's blogged all about what she learnt.

Candy Gourlay has been nominated for the Guardian Children's Fiction Prize (yay!) and this week it's her turn to feature on their website. Candy's re-posted the two videos she made on her blog, one of which wasn't even supposed to be a video (but is great anyway). Hooray for quiet books!

I didn't have room last week for Marie Basting's blog response to the last Slushpile Challenge (in which Penny Holroyde infamously failed to find an entry funny enough to make her laugh). With the help of The Sooty Show(!) Marie's blog post explores how that competition result made her feel, and her thoughts on the enduring popularity of "goo and poo and stinky farts."

I'm going to end this week with four letters - TGFW. It stands for "Thank God for Writing" as Vanessa Harbour talks movingly about what writing means to her and how it helps her through some difficult life situations. #TGFW indeed.

Nick.


A SCBWI member since 2009, Nick Cross is a former Undiscovered Voices winner who currently writes children's short fiction for Stew Magazine.

Nick's most recent blog post found him coming Out of the Cave, to consider writing, hiding and "the rent-a-gobs of children’s literature."

Telling Tales

Abu Shady the last professional hakawati
or traditional storyteller in Syria 
In most cultures, the storyteller has an honoured place. Abu Shady here sits in the Al-Nawfara Coffee Shop Damascus. The reciter of Beowulf would have been given a warm spot by the fire. The whole horde in the great hall would fall silent when the first word 'Hwæt' was spoken and the well-known story 'held children from play'.


As the Anglo-Saxons knew, poetry helped people recite stories - through rhythm and alliteration, or rhyme. Movements and gesture, dance and other arts have all been used to convey the memory and wisdom of tribes through narrative. Engaging deeply with stories avoids the risk of that wisdom becoming trite, of becoming a stream of sound-bites only fit for tacky 'inspirational' posters. It is the shared going-through that embeds the sentiment in us - and the learning.

Kathak dancer - 'that which tells a story, that is 'Kathak'
Creative Commons
Story explores consequences. We learn their truths alongside our heroes and heroines, villains and tricksters, perplexed lovers and redeemed souls. A change of heart cannot be believed unless we truly know that heart and its many ways.

A burnt hand teaches best...
                                                     
                                                                                  it is said, yet when we truly live through a story, we share the learning without the worst of any pain or scarring. Storytellers, whether through words or pictures or both, invite their tribe to involve themselves in the drama. For our readers or viewers, gamers or listeners, the story must engage before any experience can happen. We owe it to them to use as much skill and honesty as we can. Otherwise, why bother? How else can we earn our place beside the hearth?

'Fireside' by Joseph Henry_Sharp, c.1900
Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons
A suggestion
You may wish to keep this exercise private - even so , I promise you that the emotions you evoke will strengthen your creativity.


Think back to something you learned the hard way.

What were your hopes - and what were your fears? What drove you to that point? Recall as many sounds and smells as you can. What about the time of day, the weather? Can you remember anything you touched or tasted?

Tell that story back to yourself in whatever way you find best. You might like to use a different persona if it's a really painful memory - or change one significant detail to take some of  the sting out of it. The important thing is the emotional sequence of that story - and its resolution in something learned.




K. M. Lockwood is a writing name of Philippa R. Francis. As well as being a regular contributor, Philippa (@lockwoodwriter) is also part of the Words & Pictures team as the @Words8Pictures Tweetmaster, growing our following and maintaining our 'Industry news' feed.

Sunday, 17 August 2014

Ask a Publisher: David Fickling, Publisher, David Fickling Books

David Fickling, @DFB_storyhouse talks to @CathJacobNews



This interview was recorded at
David Fickling Books, Oxford
on 20th June 2014.




Catherine Jacob is an award-winning journalist who has worked for ITV, Five and Sky News. She is also an Honorary Mention for Undiscovered Voices 2014 with her MG novel The Perigree Moonlings. Her first novel was shortlisted for the Northern Writers' Crime Competition 2012 and her short story, Child's Play was shortlisted for the Asham Award 2011. She juggles working with being a mum to two little girls.

Saturday, 16 August 2014

Unmissableness



Sometimes soldiering on is not an option and last week was one of those times - I languished on a cliff top on the very windy Isle of Wight nursing a very sore head. Consequently this catching up post will be a list of unmissables from the last fortnight!





Unmissable #1:
Have you booked for the conference? Word is places are selling fast. You'll only have yourself to blame...

Unmissable #2:
Unsnapped? The Agents Party is in the revamped Charing Cross Foyles on Friday 19th September. Re Blame in #1 - ditto.

Unmissable #3: DEADLINE 7th September - The Badge Competition. I'm sorry, I did miss a reminder about the conference scholarship deadline - I hope you made it.

Unmissable #4:
Interview with Robert Muchamore part 1 and part 2 - need I say more?

Unmissable #5:
ONE, TWO whole blog breaks! I'd take a long lunch rather than squishing into a coffee break.

Unmissable #6:
Relive the Croquetastic Picture Book Retreat with Shana Neiberg Shuschitsky  - 'Weavers of words and Pictures unite!'

Unmissable #7:
Wonderful Guardian longlisted Candy!


Unmissable#8:
Fabulous new Featured `Illustrator Dave Gray makes a male hat trick -    Paul Morton, Alex Wilson and now Dave - all in a row!

Unmissable #9:
Brilliant editing activity for the new term. Take note SCBWI network groups!

Unmissable #10: The lovely Christina! - Nicky's final ( just for now, I hope) debut author interview

Unmissable #11:
A newAgent Confidential with Penny Holroyde!

and finally Unmissable #12:
Ten huge congratulations for Mike Brownlow!

No apologies at all for over enthusiastic use of !!! in this unmissable list.

And next week, more unmissableness:

  • A bumper summer special, so fitting for the publisher of the Phoenix Comic - 40 minutes of David Fickling wisdom on Ask a Publisher.
  • Inspiration from Philippa and proofreading from Catriona
  • And an interview with one of the stars of the Picture Book Retreat, Alex Deacon



Hope it's a good week!


Jan Carr




Jan Carr is the editor of Words & Pictures. Her fiction is all over the place, she blogs occasionally and loves to write in magenta. You can contact her at editor@britishscbwi.org.

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