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The Magic of Christmas – What Makes a Lasting Christmas Picture Book?

'Tis the season to be jolly – and to buy books as presents for little ones! 


The bookshops are filled with Christmas-themed books on display tables:

Display of Christmas-themed picture books at Waterstone's High Street Kensington

They are jam-packed with classics. There are countless re-tellings and re-packagings of The Night Before Christmas,

some beautiful newly illustrated versions of The Twelve Days of Christmas,

not to mention an exquisite new edition of Snow by Walter de la Mare, illustrated by Carolina Rabei.

And of course, there are Christmas adventures for favourite characters, including Peppa Pig, Blue Kangaroo, Snoopy, Alfie and Paddington Bear.

So what, in this market seemingly populated by traditional classics and character-led publishing, is breaking through to become a modern classic? The trouble with Christmas books is that they have to sell now, but they also need to work year after year. Here are some examples of Christmas books that we love and why:

 Ellie's choices:

1. Father Christmas Needs a Wee by Nicholas Allan

This has to be a modern Christmas classic! This funny picture book is just jam-packed with cheeky, festive fun. Not only do we have poor Father Christmas desperately in need of a pee (definitely a theme that most of us - young and old - can relate to!) but there's also a brilliant counting element seamlessly woven into it too. It's fast becoming a permanent fixture on the Christmas best-seller lists.

2. The Jolly Christmas Postman by Janet and Allan Ahlberg

This is another timeless classic, and also a Kate Greenaway medal winner! What's NOT to love about this fantastically festive tale? Set in a magical winter wonderland, not only is there a wonderfully jolly rhyming text, but the novelties are such great fun! Oh, and the story is  also full of characters that are immediate and recognizable to all young readers. 

3. How Many Sleeps Till Christmas? by Mark Sperring and Sebastien Braun

Similarly, this lovely story by Mark Sperring picks up on a well-worn phrase and uses strong characters and a clever counting-down element that will strike a chord in lots of households in the run-up to Christmas. What makes this really special is the clever use of a relatively modern, and now extensively used phrase, to hook and engage with the reader.

 Natascha's choices:

1. Dear Santa by Rod Campbell

This delightful board book boasts hours of lift-the-flap fun for the very young, as little ones try to guess what present Santa has sent this time by the shape and size of the wrapping paper. The cute, fluffy touch-and-feel kitty cat has that 'aw' factor - what child hasn't wished for a pet for Christmas at one time or another?

 2.  The Christmas Angels by Else Wenz-Vietor

A beautifully-illustrated book, translated from the original German, that embodies the spirit of Christmas. With clever use of novelty and a short text, this book is a firm favourite in our house at Christmas time. It has a kind of nostalgic feel to it and is one of the few around that actually speaks to the message of giving that is central to the holiday, but often forgotten in the modern, commercial world. 

3. Is it Christmas? by John Prater

This story beautifully depicts a small child's anticipation in the run-up to Christmas and all the homey activities - card-making, baking, decorating and waiting for Santa and the family to arrive - that punctuate modern-day Christmases the world-over. Its sequel and companion book, Baby Bear's Christmas Kiss, carries on the story on Christmas Day, with Baby Bear's quest to find the perfect present for Grandbear and all the humour and warmth of Christmas Day surrounded by family.

 What are your favourite Christmas picture books? 

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Ask a Picture Book Editor

Ellie and Natascha are delighted to join our Ask a Picture Book Editor column, where you can ask them anything you’d like about picture books. 

Tell us a little bit about your experience editing picture books: 

I always have, and always will love picture books! I knew I wanted to be an editor from quite a young age when I used to cut up my mum’s old magazines and use them to make my own scrapbook stories. I finally found my way into children’s books via a stint at a technical publisher and then as a writer for a children’s magazine. I’ve been editing picture books for the last seven years and am currently Senior Editor at Little Tiger Press. I consider myself very lucky to have such a fun and fantastic job. Each stage has its own exciting elements; from finding a text that you love (and that you know will strike a chord with children), to seeing the first sketches from an illustrator, to holding the finished book in your hands, opening the cover and, finally, starting the story! 

I have always loved books and have an affinity with small children. I love the way they look at the world with fresh eyes, with an incredible honesty and sense of wonder! I am passionate about picture books and love editing. I relish the process of ‘cooking’ stories with authors, illustrators and designers to help a picture book evolve from an initial germ of an idea into something that has wings, where the words and pictures are seamless – though a heck of a lot of behind-the-scenes deliberation and fine-tuning has made them seem so. For 17 years, I worked in-house at major publishers. But, when I had my son, I decided I wanted to get back to editing and help authors and illustrators shape their stories. So, I started Blue Elephant Storyshaping, an editing, coaching and mentoring service to help authors and illustrators fine-tune their work pre-submission. I love what I do! 

What is a picture book? 

It’s a harmony of words and pictures working
seamlessly together to tell a tale and 
inspire a mind. 

A picture book is the most perfect way 
of communicating a story 
to a very young child. 




What’s your favourite classic picture book? 

This is so hard! It really depends on my mood. 
If I’m feeling like a chuckle then I always turn 
to The Elephant and the Bad Baby 
by Elfrida Vipont and Raymond Briggs. 

I love the striking illustrations and cumulative nature of the text. The escalating chaos and drama is so well handled and the voice and character of the long-suffering elephant and the bad baby are so well observed. It never fails to make me smile.

from The Elephant and the Bad Baby

Choosing just one book is such a challenge! 
I like to think there are books for all
 stages of life and all moods. 
I love Make Way for Ducklings by Robert McCloskey. The writing and the drawing in it are exquisite and the story still works for children today.

I love the humour of the ducks’ names and the imagery of them waddling right through the middle of Boston traffic – it’s a classic example of taking an unusual ‘everyday’ occurrence and turning it into a great children’s story. 

from Make Way for Ducklings

 
What’s your favourite contemporary picture book?  

I adore My Big Shouting Day by Rebecca Patterson. It’s a modern classic for me. It so perfectly encapsulates toddler tantrums and that inexplicable rage that can occur at the smallest of things. It’s a wonderful way of exploring emotions and why we feel the way we do, and it’s handled with the right balance of humour and warmth that never makes it feel worthy. 

from My Big Shouting Day!

 My current favourite, laugh-out-loud is Goldilocks and the Three Dinosaurs by Mo Willems. 



What’s not to like? It has Goldilocks gorging herself with chocolate pudding, three gormless dinosaurs (!) and a moral without being too moral. Genius.

from Goldilocks and the Three Dinosaurs

What is the most common mistake made in picture book submissions? 


I think many people think that because a picture book is short that there isn’t enough space for plot or narrative development – this is not true! A lot of the submissions that fall onto my desk (whilst they may have a wonderful voice, lots of humour, great characters etc) often lack strength of story – not enough happens. The phrase I often find myself thinking is ‘not enough meat on its bones’. It’s vital to give a text enough narrative to engage a reader and ensconce them in your world. 

Frequently, authors don’t think through the characters’ motivation enough. The result is that the story comes out flat and the editor thinks, “So what?” and sends it right back. It is essential to know why a character is acting the way they are and what they want (what’s at stake?) so that the story doesn’t fall flat. 

Tell us about a childhood memory:

 Ellie

Finding a perfectly shaped shell on the beach on a family holiday – then promptly losing it! It was very upsetting! 

Natascha

I used to climb up into a bougainvillea tree in the garden of our weekend house in Teresopolis (in the mountainous region outside Rio de Janeiro where I grew up) and read the books my grandmother sent from England. 

What’s your favourite ice-cream flavour: 

 
Ellie: Strawberry! With an extra helping of fresh strawberries, please! 

Natascha: Vanilla with hot chocolate sauce (of course!). 

Great, so now you know a bit about us – now, it’s your turn to ask some questions!

For each month’s post, we will set readers a challenge so we can cover key picture book topics. For our next post on 7 April, we would like to ask:

“What makes a good picture book topic?”

To send us your answers and other questions about picture books, you can add a comment below or email your questions to writers@britishscbwi.org

Natascha Biebow is editor, mentor and
coach at www.blueelephantstoryshaping.com

Ellie Farmeris Senior Editor
at Little Tiger Press www.littletiger.co.uk