Showing posts with label Golden Egg Academy. Show all posts
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Sunday, 2 February 2014

Trust Your Subconscious by Beverley Birch

Try a web search on ‘subconscious mind’. You’ll find a surfeit: definitions, exploring it, connecting subconscious and conscious to expand creativity. And so on. 

And a lot on making conscious effort to tap into that vast personal repository of memory, perceptions, knowledge, emotions.




A familiar one is mind mapping - freeing thoughts to take off in any direction, develop extensions and connections not originally conceived. Many writers use it to throw up ideas on anything from plot and character traits to book and chapter titles - words, ideas, images, links, subsequently harnessed, pointing directions or usefully organised into a firm structure. 

It struck me, though, that for us – fiction writers – awareness of our subconscious is a part of life - a constant travelling companion. And it further struck me that in my parallel life as editor and mentor to other writers, new and established, I’ve registered a tide gathering momentum – one that we need to stem. 


The issue for us (writers) is not so much learning to tap into our subconscious, but keeping confidence in it; having the courage not to treat it as an unwanted intruder and try to shut it out, but give it nurturing space. 


In the unforgiving publishing climate of now, market pressures mitigate against the time, resources, and editorial backing to explore and play with your writing, to try different things or break new ground. It requires considerable determination to face it, and dare to take it on. 

For writers new and experienced, the stress is all on planning and plotting carefully, being clear in pitch and focus, readership, market, on how to ‘sell’ your idea so an editor will see how to ‘sell’ it to their publisher. 

All important, and true. 

Yet also untrue, if these pressures dominate at the wrong point of the imaginative journey from which a story springs. Control can extinguish the spark that propelled you forward with something fresh, something that is YOU. 


Originality and a story worth telling don’t come from thinking harder, planning harder, learning the components and ingredients that make a good book. They come from the uniqueness of each of us, experiences, perceptions, anxieties, emerging from and played upon by everything we see, hear, smell, read, watch, perceive.


All this buries itself in our subconscious, rising to the surface in dreams, reactions, emotions, and even stray thoughts, ideas, images that can float to mind when we are doing something mundane, having a bath, peeling potatoes, staring out of the window on a train. Yet how often do we think – Go Away! That’s not what I need to think about now! Come on, focus! 

We disregard these wisps, because they don’t fit, they’re not part of the current game-plan.

I was once asked to write a picture book text for a particular artist. I duly put aside the current work-in-progress novel, had a think, then another think, reread my ideas notebooks, did mind map after mind map … I pounded away at the problem, increasingly frustrated. 

Blank. A month later - still blank. No story, or even the shadow of one. I owned up, suggested the commissioning editor approach someone else. 

The whole thing disappeared from my mind. I sank back into writing my novel. Went to bed one night – had what I recall as an entirely dreamless sleep, was just drifting into full consciousness next morning, to find opening words, rhythms, then a full story-line of a picture book galloping through my head. I grabbed a notebook and wrote it down, just as I ‘heard’ it. 


The weirdest thing was that it had a setting I’d never been to, childhood fears I don’t remember having, found a resolution in something I’d never done. I’ve not the slightest idea where it came from or how it shaped itself so completely in my head. But it came from me, and it came because I’d stopped looking for it. 


I tidied it, but it changed only in precision of words, not theme or story; I showed the editor – who contracted it immediately for publication. 

A different example from my editor life. An author had delivered a book. Classy writer, impressive backlist, but increasingly anxious about keeping up with changing ‘market’, sliding into that slough of waning confidence. Ideas in the book had enormous potential. It had a crop of interesting characters. But it felt rather run of the mill, nothing really surprising was happening. And it lacked her spark. 

I dreaded saying so. 

What emerged in our discussion was that, really, at heart, she knew this, and each effort to improve it made it worse. 

But also that she’d been having what she called a daydream, a persisting one, of the story as a film with a rather bizarre scene with two new characters. It didn’t fit with her original storyline … 

I told her she could have more time, a lot more, and sent her away to follow the trail where it took her. Barely a month later, an unusual and exciting story arrived on my desk. She’d unlocked the telling and the story was fraught with delicious dramatic tension throughout.

Simple. Easy to forget. Easy to bury it beneath that craft-based struggle with plotting, tightening, shaping.


Easy to forget that the process of refinement and clarity is a stage superimposed after the essentially instinctive flow of word after word after word, idea after idea, image after image through your head. 


Equally easy also to struggle on with a problem, not realising that if you look away from it, do something else, invariably your subconscious will present you with some kind of direction through. Interesting writing doesn’t spring from just making words behave properly. If that’s all there is, it loses its energy, originality and power. Interesting writing, stories that open doors for readers, spring from a messy mix of exploration, trial and error – drawing deep from each writer’s unique subconscious. 


So – my message is, trust your subconscious. It’s a bottomless mine that throws up gems.




@bevbirchauthor
Beverley Birch is an author and editor. Her own books have been nominated for the Carnegie medal and shortlisted for awards here and abroad, and range from picture books and novels to biographies, retellings of classic works, and collaborations with photographer Nick Birch. As editor, she’s been three times shortlisted for the Branford Boase Award in recognition of the editor’s role in nurturing new talent. She stepped down from her fiction commissioning role at Hodder Children’s Books a year ago to concentrate on her author life and on giving workshops for promising writers as part of Imogen Cooper’s Golden Egg Academy. [www.goldeneggacademy.co.uk, or follow Golden Egg Workshops for Children's Writers on Facebook.] Beverley also continues selectively to provide editorial consultancy for publishers.

Sunday, 6 October 2013

When should a writer pay for editorial guidance?

Sara O'Connor is taking a short break from her usual Ask A Publisher feature this month to look at the pros and cons of paying for editorial consultancy. When is it worth forking out for specialist advice? And who should you trust with your hard-earned cash? Sara has spoken with a number of different industry experts to find out best practice.


Today, I'm changing up the format: I'm asking myself the question. When should and shouldn't a writer pay for editorial guidance? It's a long one, but worth it, if you are considering parting with your money.

(This is different to paying for agenting or publishing services, both of which are covered at length on the wonderful Writers Beware site.)

I'm talking about paying for an editorial report or a conference or a retreat, etc. because it's not always the right thing to do. I've asked a few trusted colleagues about this, and here is what they've advised.

SPECIFIC HELP
Jenny Jacoby, freelance editor (and part-time Hot Key Books editor) Jacoby & Whitehead


"Only employ professional editorial help when you have worked and worked on the text - and feel you can't make it any better. This isn't to say it can't get any better, but if you need specific help to identify places for improvement - such as pacing, or characterisation - you're probably at a stage where it's worth paying for advice."

It's a compact quote, but packs a lot of punch. Note the word "specific". I think it's really helpful to know what you want out of a critique before you pay for it. That way, you'll know you're going to get your money's worth.

DO YOUR RESEARCH
Speaking of money's worth, agent extraordinaire, Gemma Cooper, has this to say:
@gemma_cooper

"There is a lot of free advice readily available on the internet - with writing forums (like Verla Kay, Absolute Write), beta reading for other authors, editor/agent blogs, and resources like Words and Pictures - so I would advise people use as many free resources as possible when starting out with their first submissions. Where I think paying for writing advice is a good idea, is if you are getting close with agents and editors - personalised rejections on fulls, offers to revise and resubmit – and just need that professional fresh set of eyes to help get your over that last hurdle.

I've had submissions from people who have used editorial services or so called 'book doctors' and I’ve worried that they have been scammed because their work contains basic errors and things no competent editor would miss. So do your research and make sure you are paying for good advice. Does the person have a solid background in editorial? Are any of their clients published? Can you get references?

Paying for writing advice comes in many forms - having a membership to SCBWI, attending conferences and panels, using an editorial service, purchasing writing craft books - before you spend any money, do your research. How helpful each of these things are will depend at what stage your writing career is at."

TOOLS TO HONE YOUR CRAFT
If you aren't sure what kind of help to go for, consider this: From Dr Vanessa Harbour, lecturer at Winchester University and tutor for the Golden Egg Academy
Golden Egg Academy 
@VanessaHarbour and @TheGEAcademy

"A creative writing course, in whatever format, will not tell you what to write but it will equip you with the tools to hone your craft and make your writing the best it possibly can be. Courses provide an opportunity to experiment with and explore your writing, enabling you to find your own voice in an encouraging and supportive environment. It allows you to experience working with professionals and gain from their insights, whilst giving you permission to immerse yourself in your creative endeavour."

SELF-PUBLISHING
Self-publishing is a brave and exciting way to publish your book. In my opinion, if you are self-publishing, you simply must pay for a copy editor/proofreader before publishing. Take pride in what you are about to say to the world, and make sure it's clean, spelled correctly, and that your character's hair is the same colour throughout.

INDUSTRY KNOWLEDGEABLE
The answer that I want to stress the most is you should pay for help when you know you can trust what you are paying for.

Imogen Cooper and Beverley Birch, Golden Egg Academy
Golden Egg Academy
@Editorchicken and @TheGEAcademy

"Proper time spent on guiding you in your writing aims, and your writing results, by objective, industry knowledgeable, experienced editors cannot be found in any other way [than paying for it] before contract to a publisher. Friends, family and writers’ groups can all provide forms of support, criticism and encouragement, but those people, more often than not, are not editors. Editors are experienced in the detailed analysis of the work that will enhance your story, and discussion of that work is precisely what you need.

 If editorial support is of high quality, then the editor involved will be open and honest about the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript, from plot issues to point of view to dramatic tension, and realistic about the difficulties of becoming a published author. Talent is born not made, but a good editor will ‘guide, motivate, inspire and support’ their writers, ensuring at all times that they are objective and honest in their feedback."

ONE FINAL WORD - WILLING TO LISTEN
Catherine Coe


"When you only want to hear positive feedback and are looking for reassurances to massage your ego. Or if you think it'll provide an easy way to improve your manuscript without having to do much work yourself. Yes, you will receive lots of detailed feedback and suggestions, be guided to focus on specific areas and be tutored on self-editing techniques, but you will have to be prepared to work hard to make the improvements and strengthen your writing - it takes passion and commitment to both consider the advice and then implement revisions.

Also, please don't pay for advice if you're unsure of the service you're commissioning - any good literary consultant/editor will be happy to talk through the specifics of what they will be doing, to tailor the service to your needs, and to answer any questions you might have.

A creative writing course or work with an editor won't work if you are not open to ideas and experiences. You need to be willing to listen to and act upon criticism - something that some writers find very difficult."

All of these are people whose opinions and advice I would hugely endorse. And there are three others whose expertise is worth having: Karen Ball, Sara Grant and Jasmine Richards, three fantastic editors with whom I have started a new venture: Book Bound. It is a writing retreat for writers ready to take the next step. You can find out more details here. We've also blogged about the plethora of writing help available here.


Sara O’Connor is an American settled in England and is the Editorial Director, Print and Digital, at an innovative children’s fiction publisher. Along with creating the concept for MY SISTER THE VAMPIRE, she has written four books in the series. With Sara Grant, she is a co-creator of the successful SCBWI-BI Undiscovered Voices project, helping over twenty unpublished writers win publishing contracts. She has been nicknamed Sara “Slasher” O’Connor (complete with Texas Chainsaw Massacre poster) by previous writing students who also say, “Every time I come across her Wise Words it feels like a personal pep talk!” She loves teaching writing for children and is delighted to be working with three good friends on the Book Bound writing retreat.

Saturday, 13 April 2013

Another Top Week for Tips

It’s been a top week for tips, from K.M. Lockwood’s for Authors Working in Public and School Libraries (part 1) on Monday to Ten Top Tips and Techniques for Illustrators from Paul Morton on Friday, with Rosemary Bird-Hawkins' feature on writing workshops for kids the week before, we’re building a great resource.


All this talk of tips reminded me of my childhood Best Christmas Present Ever – a tin of Caran d’Ache 'fibralo' - felt tips. I loved everything about it – from the opening click of the tin, the rainbow inside, the smell and the feel of each pen, to the way they’d glide across the paper soaking it with colour. Lots of kids love to draw and colour and I was no exception. I'd spend hours copying Arthur Rackham’s fairy pictures or covering the page in psychadelic swirling paisley patterns, very seventies. I have one colour left from my tin. Sadly it’s not my favourite indigo blue, but the 41 year old felt tip does still work...


Another Top Tip
...just.

With the London Book Fair about to kick off, I was glad Network News this week was from London. The officially lovely Anita Loughrey has so much going on. My hope for Network News is that each region will be inspired by what the others are doing. The London goal setting brunch definitely looks like an idea that will travel.


@Words8Pictures
Have you spotted our Twitter feed? We're using it as a cheeky way of importing Industry News onto the blog. I already have two noble volunteers who will 'Twitter hover' to keep the feed updated  but if you're a SCBWI British Isles member and you think that retweeting for Words & Pictures could fit into your daily schedule do get in touch or leave me a comment below.


I'm very excited that we could have our very own UK Query Sharks. Really, there is only one, and that is the esteemed Janet Reid. So what personae are The Bent Agency's Gemma Cooper and Molly Ker Hawn going to adopt? Suggestions so far are: Query Eagle, Query Vulture, Query Kitties and Query Goldfish (I have to own the last two.)  I’ll leave the decision about branding to Gemma and Molly but I hope lots of you will send them your questions, and query letters for honest but 'gentle' critique. 

Did you enjoy Rowena House’s cracking interview with Imogen Cooper? Imogen is such a good egg to be so generous with her knowledge and the academy deserves every success in their efforts to incubate shiny new writing talent. If you're unpublished, feel you're almost there,  and  haven't already, The Golden Egg Academy is well worth checking out. 

Our other big feature for the week was Sam Hawksmoor’s So You Want to Write for a Living. We worried that Sam’s honest take on the subject, might be depressing – we didn’t need to, W&P readers are a realistic bunch. I think our eyes wide-open attitude to our craft has some part to play in the SCBWI successes we celebrate every Saturday. Sam’s article is a zippy read from the heart, sobering yet highlighting the very positive advantages of keeping the day job, which aren't all financial.

Next week, as well as the usual, news, celebrations, and Nick's Ten Minute Blog Break, we have Library Tips (part 2), we welcome our first Author Guest Blogger, Bryony Pearce, and we’re having a laugh with Celia Anderson – what do kids think is funny?

Finally, on Friday, Gillian McClure will be celebrating the life and work of Jan Ormerod, sadly lost to us earlier this year. The Guardian said that Jan "brought a fresh vision to children's picturebooks with her luminous images, storytelling genius and understanding of how children behave." Words & Pictures is privileged to have a tribute feature from those that knew her.

Thank you so much for reading and I do hope there's something here that will bring you back next week!

Jan Carr

Jan Carr is the editor of Words & Pictures. Her fiction is older middle grade, she blogs occasionally and loves to write in magenta.

Monday, 8 April 2013

South West Writers At Large

Report from Lesley Moss

Some of us from the South West SCBWI group came out of our writing caves to meet for an impromptu Exeter Café Write-In just before the Easter break.
Our group included three Undiscovered Voices winners and one Cornerstones Wowfactor winner!


We also welcomed Sandra Greaves, a UV 2012 winner and soon to be published by Chickenhouse to her first Write-In.

And I finally got UV 2009 winner Lucy Jones to sign a copy of her latest publication, Rise Of The Shadowmares, for me.

Maybe a Talk-In is a better description of this particular meeting! 


When writers get together after working on their own for several weeks or months, there is always a lot to discuss, and so it proved.
We had a lively discussion on ways to tackle structure in novels, ranging from screenplay models – UV 2010 winner Yona Wiseman is a film-maker as well as a writer - to Chickenhouse editor Imogen Cooper’s excellent Bookmap© tool.  (You can learn more about Bookmaps© by attending courses with Imogen’s Golden Egg Academy, based in Frome, Somerset: a great new resource for writers.)


There's always a lot to discuss...

Next, Ellen Renner provoked an interesting chat about contemporary publishing, sales and marketing, and why most of our editors are women.
I asked everyone what they had brought to work on. Ellen (a Cornerstones Wowfactor winner, now multi-published) is completing final edits on her latest book, Tribute: a YA epic fantasy, to be published by Hot Key Books in March 2014.

Lucy is working on an exciting new teen mystery/fantasy, and Sandra on The Skull In The Wood, coming out in September 2013 with Chickenhouse.
Amelia Mansfield is researching material for her YA crossover historical fantasy, set in the Regency period, which is part of her Creative Writing Phd (sounds fascinating!), and Yona is continuing on her YA Urban Fantasy. I'm digesting some editorial feedback from the Golden Egg Academy on a middle-grade novel …

All too soon, after much tea and cake had been consumed, and ideas for future meetings discussed, it was time for us to leave.
Later this year we plan to follow up our Write-Ins with Edit-Ins – a natural progression! We will be sharing editing techniques and thinking about how to apply them to our own work.

Our Socials Organiser, Yona will also be arranging another social meet-up very soon

If you can’t make it to Exeter but are a SW SCBWI_BI member who would like to meet up with other local members in your town, do contact us Ellen Renner or Lesley Moss and we will try to help - email southwest AT britishscbwi.org.
Or you can come and join our South West Ning Group, where we arrange our meetings and chat.  




@anonymoss
Lesley Moss joined SCBWI in 2003 and over several years has volunteered as an e-critique group moderator for Picturebook Too! and the original poetry e-critique group, and as SW Joint Co-ordinator. She is a member of www.thefuneverse.comand writes picture books, funny poetry and 8-12 fiction. She originally studied art and design and spent some years in community arts, including a spell as a mime animateur, working creatively with children of all ages, and much more. But her first love is writing. 


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