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Friday, 28 February 2014

A meeting at the SCBWI-BI conference gives Cath Howe a flying start!


This week we're delighted to announce that Cath Howe is up, up and away with the amazing agent Anne Clark, of the Anne Clark Literary Agency! She is looking forward to a real creative partnership and says thanks to SCWBI for all the warm support, courses and workshops. 



Cath tells us how it all began 

“When I began writing for children I was writing drama scripts for them to perform at local arts festivals in South West London. I think that's really how I found my voice and my confidence, because I saw my work performed and got feedback from the children and lots of encouragement from parents and teachers. Working in schools helps - children are so startlingly honest in their comments!

"My writing for educational publishers (two fiction books for 8-10s and three plays) was a good preparation for sending work to agents and publishers because I saw how editors worked and I had deadlines and word limits to stick to. I've also had the support of an excellent writers' group throughout. Everyone tells you how important it is to be persistent in trying to develop your career and that's certainly true but I think the other key thing is to build a relationship with fellow writers who believe in your work, aside from your family and friends. I think I've been very lucky in that respect.

"Anne Clark is an agent I can really collaborate with and I'm so glad I got the chance to meet her at the SCWBI Conference because it is now so much easier to speak on the phone and to email each other having met in person. We seem to get on really well and we're both pretty direct. I think she will bring out the best in me."

Anne Clark says, "I'm delighted to welcome Cath Howe to the agency. I was taken by the particular charm and humour of Cath's writing, and her sharp insights into how children think and feel."

So let's celebrate with Cath this week. Here's to her future success and the beginning of a fantastic relationship!





Tania Tay is an ex-advertising copywriter and has been published in Sable LitMag. She is currently writing a YA romantic thriller, is a member of The Golden Egg Academy and is on the editorial team at Words & Pictures.

Thursday, 27 February 2014

Featured Illustrator: Jion Sheibani

 This month Words and Pictures welcomes a new artist Jion Sheibani as Featured Illustrator. With experience of living in both the UK and France, Jion launched her career with the support offered by SCBWI. See more of her work on the Featured Illustrator Gallery.



I’ve always loved writing and illustrating. I’ve got sketchbooks filled with weird little characters I made up when I was little. My favourite is a comic I made about an egg called Smeg. It was a word I used to find pant-wettingly hilarious. I was also obsessed with cringy jokes as a kid. My earliest creation was a plagiarised version of the Marks and Spencer Jolly Joke Book, which was for a long time my favourite book. I loved the drawings in them and spent way too many hours staring at them and learning the jokes by heart.

I have a really strong memory from when I was about 8 or 9 where I was drawing and thinking : «When I grow up, I want to do this ALL day!» It was remembering that memory - after my son, Oscar, was born - that spurred me on to give illustrating a go.


My first book, aged 5




I’d always been more confident about writing and when I left university, I started writing a children’s novel, I thought it was going to be the next Harry Potter (I wouldn’t be surprised if that’s what my submission letters actually said). I sent off the first few chapters and got interest from quite a big agent who wanted to see more. THIS IS IT! I thought. There was only one HUGE problem : I hadn’t finished it! I had done the worst thing a writer can do. Then I did the second worst thing a writer can do. I rushed off an ending, sent it off and never heard from her again...Of course.



I carried on after that but I was also on the verge of setting up my own business - an English language school for French kids, which then grew very quickly. In between running that, I went on two excellent Arvon courses and received great encouragement from Carol Ann Duffy and Malachy Doyle, to whom I am indebted.  It wasn’t until I started doing short illustration courses in  Paris that I thought I was actually capable of illustrating my own work. Then I joined SCBWI and went to my first Winchester conference in 2012, where I was given the Best Up and Coming Portfolio Prize. It was just the boost I needed to keep going. I came away from that conference with fantastic advice, namely from Barefoot Books Art Director, Vic Tyler.

Over a year later and I am developing one of my stories with a UK publisher - thanks to the 2013 SCBWI conference.  I can’t say anything yet, but hopefully I’ll have good news soon...:-) It all depends on how it does at Bologna. In any case, it’s been such a learning curve and I have received so much valuable advice from the editor and art director I’m working with.





TIPS


I feel a bit of a novice to be giving out tips but what I’ve learnt so far is : make time and space for your creativity and make sure you’re in the right frame of mind for it. I think it was John Cleese who gave a very good talk about creativity and how the brain needs to be relaxed (This is how I convince myself not to work and watch The Good Wife instead, anyway...)

Also, perhaps most importantly of all, don’t give up! 


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See Jion's work in the Featured Illustrator Gallery. Her personal website is here, and blog here.  She can be reached at jionsheibani@gmail.com

Wednesday, 26 February 2014

Judy Waite: 'Growing Pains, Writing for Young Adults' Masterclass, 8 March 2014

Alison Smith
@judywaite2
Judy Waite is an award-winning author of over forty novels for children and young adults. Her work ranges through picture books for the very young, up to gritty young adult and ‘crossover’ fiction, which include Forbidden and Game Girls.


Judy also teaches Creative Writing at the University of Winchester, working with undergraduates, MA supervisions and PhD consultancy.

She runs workshops for all age groups, works regularly in schools at all Key Stage levels, as well as speaking at conferences and key creative/educational events.

Her areas of specialism are fiction for children, creativity, creative writing techniques and educational consultancy for both writing and creative practice. Judy has also developed a creative writing website www.wordtamer.co.uk which connects creativity with ICT and interactive technology.

Cutting edge ideas for a cutting edge generation: YA fiction is a thriving and exciting market, but how, as authors, do we keep our writing current and contemporary? 

Alison Smith caught up with award-winning author, academic and educational consultant Judy Waite in advance of her upcoming London Masterclass: Growing Pains - Writing for Young Adults.

How do we get inside the teenage brain?
In some ways young adults should be perfect as authors for their own age group because of course they already 'talk the talk', but in my experience (twenty years teaching creative writing in schools and at universities) the ideas are there but the basic 'writerly' skills aren't embedded - so for this market we need to apply all our craft-type knowledge but also find our 'inner teenager' - to try and write (regardless of our individual ages) as if we were a young adult now. The masterclass I’ll be giving in March will tap into techniques and short exercise that will get those ‘teenage brains’ buzzing.

So does it need to be all about the 'lingo'?
Definitely not. Things date so fast that as soon as we've got the hang of the latest slang, it's morphed again. Innit! One of my own favourite ever novels is Catcher in the Rye - how does Salinger still appeal to teen readers with a book published in 1951? We need to know what matters to teenagers. What's universal? What stands the test of time?

Part of the session will be facing up to that blank page dilemma with techniques and tips for creating a first paragraph that dances off the page. 

Do teen novels need to be 'dark'?
A lot of them are, but we need light too. And humour, if we lean that way. Melvyn Burgess' novel Junk was very influential for me when I first started writing - multiple voice - urban settings - gritty subjects - (plus it was banned everywhere, which is always a great selling point) but writing for young adults doesn't HAVE to be urban and gritty. In the masterclass we'll discuss options – taking characters to a range of ‘places’ and seeing just how and where ideas can grow.

Do you find it hard to get started, even once you have an idea? 
Of course. The blank page is a plunge into an icy pool. Part of the session will be facing up to that blank page dilemma with techniques and tips for creating a first paragraph that dances off the page. (Or maybe, as it's YA, it's more likely to saunter off with its hands thrust firmly in its pockets...)

What do you hope the session will have achieved by the end?
  • Everyone will have created a new YA character
  • They'll know where their story takes place
  • And how to get it started.
  • There will be nods to publishers too - info about what's happening now, and who is looking for what. 


I'm really looking forward to working with other writers – whatever level they are at (and it won’t matter – everyone will evolve at their own pace) – in a genre that I love. PLUS the venue is amazing. A pub called The Theodore Bullfrog. Awesome name. How could we fail to get inspired in somewhere with a name as cool as that!

Growing Pains:Writing for Young Adults
Saturday 8th March 2014
The Theodore and Bullfrog Pub
(first floor meeting room)
26-30 John Adam Street
WC2N6HL


Cost: £30 per class for SCBWI members, £37 for non members, £108 special SCBWI member discount when you book for 4 classes. (All prices include a pre-ordered light lunch and a beverage.)

To book or for more information:  masterclasses@britishscbwi.org


Alison never wanted to become a teenager - which means she is probably not best qualified to be the interviewer for this masterclass! A graduate of the Writing for Children MA at the University of Winchester, her first (as yet unpublished) story was a futuristic middle grade eco-fantasy about two children saving the last seed bank on earth. Just to be contrary - and because she is really an old-fashioned girl at heart - she is now working on a middle grade story set in early Jacobean London.

Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Agent Confidential: Sallyanne Sweeney


Name: Sallyanne Sweeney 


AKA: SAS 


Agency: Mulcahy Associates 





Genres Represented: Every kind of children’s fiction, from picture books to YA/crossover novels, and I’m growing a small but fantastic list of illustrators too. On the adult side, I represent writers of a broad range of literary and commercial fiction (though not usually police procedurals or science fiction/fantasy) and am interested in memoirs and food writing.  

Authors Represented: Published authors/illustrators include Aita Ighodaro, Barbara Fox, Caroline Finnerty, Claire Hennessy, Felicity Everett, Francesca Gambatesa, Jane McLoughlin, Mark Boyle, Nelle Davy, Ruth Frances Long, Sarah Painter, Steven Lenton. 




Recent deals: Jon Walter’s literary debut CLOSE TO THE WIND to David Fickling Books, Kieran Fanning’s middle-grade fantasy adventure SCHOOL OF SHADOWS to Chicken House, Ruth Frances Long’s YA fantasy trilogy A CRACK IN EVERYTHING to O’Brien Press… and a few others that it’s too early to talk about.  

Wish list: I often don’t know what I’m looking for until I see it, but I love when I’m surprised (in a good way!) by a submission. The volume we receive is high, so anything that can make me sit up and pay attention is very exciting – whether that’s because of an interesting concept, unusual setting, or a really fresh, strong voice. I also want to be moved in some way by the writing – my favourite novels are those that make me laugh and cry and I love to find a character (or characters) I can root for. Overall though, I’m open to writing in any genre and age group, and most of my authors have come from unsolicited submissions. 

Favourite books:At the moment they’re HOLES by Louis Sachar, HOW I LIVE NOW by Meg Rosoff, SKELLIG by David Almond and ELEANOR AND PARK by Rainbow Rowell. Growing up, my all-time favourites were MATILDA, UNDER THE HAWTHORN TREE, GOODNIGHT MR TOM and THE BRIDGE TO TERABITHIA (and LITTLE WOMEN, partly because I’m the eldest of four sisters – but definitely more Jo March than Meg).  

Agent style:I’m a hands-on agent and work with each of my clients according to their needs at the time. I love the editorial process of collaborating with an author to make their manuscript the best it can be, and it’s so satisfying to see a novel strengthened by each round of revisions. I’m also more generally the author and book’s champion, whether that’s in placing the novel with a publisher and securing the best possible deal for the author, in selling translation or dramatic rights, or in working with the author and publisher to ensure the publication process is as smooth and successful as it can be.




How to Submit: The synopsis and first three chapters to submissions@ma-agency.com. Submissions guidelines can be found here: http://www.ma-agency.com/submissions.

Submission tips: I think Philip Pullman said “Read like a butterfly, write like a bee”, which I think is great advice. Follow agency guidelines and personalize your query letter – this will get much more attention that if you send a “Dear Agent” email off to every agency. I’d also advise against following trends; write the story only you can write.. 

Website: www.ma-agency.comhttp://www.ma-agency.com/

Twitter: @sallyanne_s 

Events: This year I’ll be at the Writers’ Workshop Getting Published Day on 1st March in Regent’s Park College, the Irish Writers’ Centre in Dublin on 8th March, Dublin Writers’ Festival on the 17th May, Winchester Writers’ Conference on 20th June and the Festival of Writing in York from 12th-14th September.

Do you have questions for Sally? Leave them here in the comments. You have more than 140 characters!



Read Nicola Morgan: How to find a good agent




Mel              Katrina              Tania,
If you are an agent and would like to be featured in Agent Confidential, please contact us at writers@britishscbwi.org

Monday, 24 February 2014

Ten-Minute Blog Break - 25th February

Numbers seem to be a big theme in the world of SCBWI blogging this week, whether it's:
1) how many books you've sold
2) how many you've read, or
3) how much better it is to have three things in a list!


Katie Dale blogs at The Edge this week, with an honest (if slightly depressing) look at author finances. Clearly explaining concepts such as advances and royalties, Katie breaks down the language of publishing deals and even tells you how many copies J.K. Rowling and Stephanie Meyer had to sell before they broke even. Writing is by no means a guaranteed money-spinner and Katie's inevitable conclusion is Don't Give Up The Day Job.

Lists are everywhere at the moment, as Buzzfeed-esque articles threaten to make the Internet collapse (or maybe that's just how they make me feel!) But here's a list that provides a nice break from "10 GIFs of Puppet Characters That Look Like Michael Gove", as K.M. Lockwood takes on The Hundred Book Challenge, listing the 100 books that made her the author she is today.

There was nowhere else I could put this next post than as the third item in the Blog Break. SCBWI-BI Regional Adviser and picture book supremo Natascha Biebow is telling us all about The Wonderful Rule of Three and its myriad uses in storytelling.

It's always nice to discover someone new, and I was very pleased to stumble upon Zoe Boyd Clack's blog this week. Zoe's post Capturing The Castle takes an engrossing look at the importance of setting in children's books, and gives examples of Middle Grade and Young Adult books with a superlative sense of place.

Finally, regular readers will know that I got shanghaied by a sea monkey last year and am more than a teensy bit excited by the forthcoming Sarah McIntyre and Philip Reeve book. Well, it got even better this week when I discovered that the book is about two of my favourite things - cakes and space! Read Sarah's blog post as she introduces some new characters from Cakes in Space, and talks about the unusual inspiration for their look.

Nick.


Nick Cross is a children's writer, blogger and all-round techno-ninja. In 2010 he was a winner of Undiscovered Voices with his zombie comedy Back from the Dead and currently writes short fiction for Stew Magazine, an event that was recently celebrated on this site.

Sunday, 23 February 2014

Shaping an MA: an interview with Julia Green

Eden Endfield
@JGreenauthor
The Bath Spa MA in Writing for Young People has been a great success, with many distinctive published writers emerging over the last ten years: Sally Nicholls, Elen Caldecott, Marie-Louise Jensen, Gill Lewis, Sam Gayton, Sheila Rance, Emma Carroll, to name a few.
The course has helped to shape the landscape of emerging British writers for children's fiction from YA to picture book.



In an interview with course director Julia Green, Eden Endfield discusses Julia's role in shaping the course and asks her how she balances her writing with the demands of being a distinguished educator in the field of children's writing.


When and how did the MAWYP start, what were its aims, how was it tailored to be specific for children's writers?
The MA in Writing for Young People began in 2004. It was created as a ‘sister’ course to the well-established MA Creative Writing: we had five published children’s authors on the staff team, and we knew there was a lot of interest from students. We already had a strong undergraduate module in writing for young people.

There are some very specific considerations for writers for young people, and that’s what the new MA addressed: issues of audience, language register, emotional content, for example, and the responsibilities we have towards young readers. We designed a very practical, specialist course, and included a module about the children’s publishing industry. We had advisors from the industry as well as the academic world.

… four of our recent alumni are on the 2014 Branford Boase longlist for debut novelists. 

The first intake was 8 enthusiastic students. This year we have 30 students, and four of our recent alumni are on the 2014 Branford Boase longlist for debut novelists. Tutors currently include Steve Voake and international award-winning Lucy Christopher; our professor is David Almond. Our strong team of tutors who are also published authors is key to the success of the course.

Rigorous, supportive workshops are at the heart of the MA, and students also benefit from 1: 1 support and advice from their manuscript supervisor. We stress the importance of reading as a writer. Visiting speakers (agents, editors, authors) provide further input. We update content annually.



How have you influenced the course?
I’ve been involved in everything, from the initial planning committee through all the subsequent developments. I brought in the two-year part-time option, seeing that this was an excellent method of study for people juggling work and family as well as writing.

We care about our students and work very hard to help them write the best book they can. Many stay in contact with us. We’ve created a ‘family’ of writers in Bath and beyond. Our involvement with the Bath Festival of Children’s Literature has consolidated that sense of a writing community.

What is teachable in writing? As one reviewer has said, you are well known for your ‘down to earth realistic teen fiction, which is both relatable and accessible.’ Do you encourage a broad church approach at Bath Spa?
You learn to write by writing; by thinking about writing, by sharing and talking about writing, and by reading. You need to play, and experiment and take risks. You need to have the rigour and discipline to do this every day, or at least as often as you can.

… what re-writing really means: re-visioning, a way of re-seeing your story. 

You need to commit to it, and write even when you don’t feel like it. You need to be able to listen to constructive feedback, and to understand what re-writing really means: re-visioning, a way of re-seeing your story.

The MAWYP provides a structure, deadlines, support and advice so this process can happen. It’s not about us teaching a set of rules, and certainly NOT about one right way of doing things or one kind of story. Our students’ novels are as varied and different and original as they are.


What do you think is important to learn/goes into being a writer for children?
A writer for young people must have the capacity to see, feel and experience the world from the viewpoint of a child/teenager. They must be able to connect emotionally with their child-self. You can improve technically as a writer, but you need that sense of connection first and foremost.

It’s not ‘easier’ to write for young people; if anything, it’s more difficult. There’s no room for self-indulgence of a literary kind, or ego. We are all part of a bigger project: engaging young people with stories. The books we read as children stay with us for ever.


How do you balance your work as a writer with being an educator? How do you turn it to your advantage?
My teaching has helped me think about and reflect on my writing process and about how best to pass on the skills I’ve acquired the long way round. I read a lot of contemporary children’s fiction. The need to balance my teaching and writing life has made me use time more efficiently. I learn from my writing colleagues, but from students too – our discussions in workshop are exciting and challenging and keep me engaged.

We are all part of a bigger project: engaging young people with stories. The books we read as children stay with us for ever.

I enjoy all the social contact. I love encouraging the creativity of other people. The downside is that I’m often under pressure from both the writing/publishing and university worlds. I sometimes long for extended periods of quiet immersion in my new novel. But I’m proud of what I’ve written since my first novel (Blue Moon, 2003): seven novels for teenagers, three for younger children plus many short stories and books for the education market. Occasionally, my university has awarded me time for my research - I stayed on a Hebridean island to research This Northern Sky.

In your novels there is always a strong sense of the characters connecting with the landscape and a sense of the transformative power of landscape.  Can you talk about the importance of place in your work, the sense of wonder?

I write about all the things that I consider important: about growing up, friendships, family relationships, love, death, loss, change.

Places have always mattered to me, and are increasingly significant in my fiction. I want to share my love of wild places, and my sense that they are vital for our well-being. That’s one of the themes in This Northern Sky: Kate has to learn to love the island, and the experience changes her.

Some of the events in the novel are based on incidents that happened to me on my first visit to the Outer Hebrides in my early twenties; I returned to these amazing islands off the west coast of Scotland to write the novel, and learned more about the current threats and challenges to island life, as well as experiencing some of the extremes of the weather.

The sound of wind and waves wove their way into everything I wrote and changed the story. I walked and wrote every day I was there. I found out about the proposed huge wind farm (it has since been scrapped, I discovered recently. My characters would be happy about that).

I didn’t want to turn the novel into polemic: it’s not as simple as wind farms being good or bad. All these issues are addressed only in as far as they are seen/thought about by my characters. I believe young people do care about and think about the environment. I recently saw a quotation from Thoreau which resonated with me: “In wildness is the preservation of the world”.

Thank you Julia for giving us your insights into the course, your thoughts on writing, and telling us about your new book. Best of luck with all your future projects, whichever hat you are wearing!


Julia Green lives in Bath. She is a Senior Lecturer in Creative Writing at Bath Spa University, and Course Director for the specialist MA in Writing for Young People. She's written three novels for young adults, published by Puffin (Blue Moon, Baby Blue, Hunter's Heart) and four published by Bloomsbury (Breathing Underwater, Bringing the Summer, Drawing with Light and This Northern Sky) as well as novels and short stories for younger children. 
Her next novel will be Seal Island (OUP, 2014). Julia will be teaching for the Arvon foundation in May: and for Ty Newydd in Wales, in April (Writing the Wild in Fiction for Young People). 




Eden Endfield trained as an artist at the Slade, with paintings in the Nat West collection, the National Portrait Gallery and private collections. After the birth of her daughter she rediscovered children’s fiction, and decided to write a children’s story. She is currently editing her first completed novel, a psychological drama for 10+ with gothic elements set on the Jurassic coast, for a London agent. She is writing her second novel, a teen love story set in upstate New York, as part of the MA in Writing for Young People at Bath Spa University. She lives in London with her best supporters and harshest critics – her husband and 14 year old daughter.

If Only W&P Could Talk...

The title nicked and bodged from James Herriot's 1973 classic is not such a vain hope, oh no. We're running with the marvellous Sara O'Connor's idea to transform the very popular Ask a Publisher post into a podcast.  We have some wonderful publishers on board and two very-lucky-to-get interviewers - thank you Catherine Jacob and Rowena House!

I'm going to leave you guessing about the incredible interviewees we have lined up so far but just to say they're BIG. Instead I'm going to introduce you to our interviewers.

Catherine is a broadcast journalist and news presenter. Among others, she's worked for ITV News, Granada and Tyne Tees and is the youngest journalist ever to be awarded the Golden Nymph for Best News Story at the Monte Carlo film and TV awards. She's also a SCBWI member and gained an honorary mention in Undiscovered Voices 2014. Look out for Catherine's UV excerpt next month when we'll be congratulating the latest crop of  honorary mentions and giving them the opportunity to link to their oh-so-very-nearly there pieces.


Rowena is an ex-Reuters foreign correspondent in Europe and Africa, now a sub-editor specialising in international affairs. She turned to writing fiction for young people to meet a deep desire to tell gritty stories that are true in an emotional sense, without being constrained by ‘the facts'. She's a SCWBI member, on the MA in Writing for Young People at Bath Spa and has already made significant contribution to Words & Pictures, notably with her wonderful interview with David Almond last year.

In other news...

Last week's highlights:



And next week...
With the Blog Break and Celebrations, we welcome Sallyanne Sweeney to Words & Pictures with an Agent Confidential on Wednesday, we have a new featured illustrator on Friday and tomorrow it's a W&P feature surprise (schedule is the W&P motto but sometimes we have to work to the wall!) We also have some Network News from Southampton, yay!

I'm popping along to UV2012 Honorary Mention, Liz de Jager's launch this week then literary lunching this week with some lovely SCBWI friends the next day - exciting!

Hope your week is exciting too,

Jan Carr



Jan Carr is the editor of Words & Pictures. Her fiction is all over the place, she blogs occasionally and loves to write in magenta. You can contact her at editor@britishscbwi.org.

Friday, 21 February 2014

A Debut Historical Writer Joins the Literary Scene!



This week we are recognising the achievements of SCBWI member, Paula Warrington, and hear how she is inspiring others to strive for their literary dreams. Paula has written for children on and off for many years and celebrates today as her short story is published in Timelines Anthology.




The brief was to write a short story with an historical setting, suitable for a 10-14-year-old audience. Join us in celebration as we applaud Paula’s short story titled ‘Thicker than Water,’ which was one of 17 stories chosen for the first edition of Timelines Anthology; an historical collection of short stories for young teenagers.

Paula tells us a little more about her story;

“In August 1848 a local newspaper, ‘The Leicester Chronicle’, reported a drunken riot in which policeman Sgt. Frank Tarratt was injured. I knew that Sgt. Tarratt had six children. What if one of them had been caught up in the rioting too? That was the starting point for my story. My protagonist is Charlie Tarratt, a 13-year-old with mixed feelings about growing up as a bobby's son, a knack for getting into trouble, and a hankering to play detective."




The Anthology launched at The Manchester Children’s Book Festival in October 2013, where Paula gave her first book reading in the company of her MA Creative Writing classmates, inspiring others to hold on tight to their dreams. What an experience!

Paula says;



“We were all a little nervous about reading at the launch but the day went well and we really enjoyed hearing one another's stories. The afternoon went by so quickly... I hope we'll get to do it all over again one day soon!”

Paula lives in Leicestershire (as her particular patch of Mercia is now known) and finds inspiration in traces of the past still visible in the towns and countryside around her. As a child she enjoyed Susan Cooper’s The Dark is Rising series, and would be thrilled if she could convey an equally strong sense of place in her own work. She hopes to have her first full length novel, a tale set in ninth-century Mercia, completed by September 2014.

...so watch this space!



Clare Welsh joined SCBWI in Feburary 2013 after her marriage to her lovely husband James was under threat from constant chunterings, questions and reading aloud over the football. She is thoroughly enjoying all that SCBWI has to offer, including helping Tania celebrating SCBWI successes as part of the Words & Pictures editorial team, and is pleased that her marriage is still firmly intact.


Pop Ups: Part One


Ed's note: A post from SCBWI BI's Illustrators' blog 2010, very much worth rerunning here as a prelude to Trish Phillipsnew pop up post next month. Over to Trish...

As Pop-up books are a little different, I thought it might be interesting to show a bit of the process which goes through many stages, here is a very condensed version of events!





First, an A6 sized dummy of 8 spreads, each showing different pop action with a rough idea of text and position.


Ongoing character sketches throughout, as are the text revisions.



Many changes to address problems (here cutting down from 6 layers to 1 by using a different method), and working up to full size which is approx 240mm w x 260mm h.



More sketches, finalising the finished page layouts and adding swatches to each spread for the colour.


Working from the finished white dummy, templates are made up by the publisher with tab, fold and cut lines which are used as a guide for artwork (each one needs a corresponding coloured back to be painted also) with large bleed just in case.



Having agreed on final designs and colour, here is the full sized background of the penultimate spread: a hungry, faceless bear!





The final product - the penultimate spread of the published book published by Caterpillar Books.



Tuesday, 18 February 2014

When Words Get Together

Hyphenated words / hyphenated-words / hyphenatedwords


Catriona Tippin aka @ProofReadingTip gives us the low-down...


Here’s a surface-skimming look at the use (or not) of hyphens to join ordinarily separate words. 

One of the many delights of the English language is the speed of construction of new words. 

Sometimes a three-part evolution takes place: 
book mark / book-mark / bookmark 
court room / court-room / courtroom 

Here are some words at the end of this process:
blackjack 
bumblebee
cashflow 
email 
goodwill 
handbook 
highbrow 
lifeline
 lifestyle 
masterclasses 
pigeonhole 
singsong 
spellchecker 
takeover 
workforce

Here are some well-established and happy hyphens:
born-again 
fast-paced 
get-together 
knee-jerk 
rat-race 
sabre-rattling 
shell-like 
slow-blinking 

Proof reading / proof-reading / proofreading – all three forms are in use but I think proofreading is winning. 

The need to create hashtags and websites is probably speeding up the fusion of words and the losing of hyphens. 

There may be two adjacent occurrences of the same letter but this doesn’t necessarily stop the fusion:
cooperation 
earring 

These still appear occasionally with a hyphen but are happiest without. 

Sometimes you can tell two words are never going to lose the hyphen, there’s some kind of instinctive aesthetic imperative going on with hat-trick – hattrick just doesn’t look right, does it? 

Some prefixes have fused to their stems: 
republished 
redrafting 
postnatal
proactive
preamble
ongoing
multimedia
mismatch
degrade 

Some have not (yet?):
anti-freeze
ex-husband
 in-depth
 pre-school 

Email is increasingly used rather than e-mail, though there’s also e-invoice and I doubt that will ever lose the hyphen (as it would look oddly German?) 

Here are some examples where the hyphen (or not) is essential to the meaning:
re-covering / recovering 
re-creation / recreation 
re-laying / relaying 

Compound modifiers may have hyphens which matter to the meaning; these are the hyphens you need to check carefully. I like these examples:

Three-hundred-year-old trees are an indeterminate number of trees that are 300 years old. 
Three hundred-year-old trees are three trees that are 100 years old. 
Three hundred year-old trees are 300 trees that are one year old. 


Use the Find function under your Edit tab to look for the hyphens you’ve used, and check the lot, giving each one some thought.


Remember a hyphen isn’t a dash – but that’s another story, for a future Proofreading Tip.





Catriona Tippin has been a member of SCBWI since 2006 and helps organise venues for SCBWI North East. Details of her writing and illustrating here. She proofreads study guides, house magazines and publicity material for two national educational charities, in addition to working on a variety of proofreads and copyedits for the growing self-published world. Her monthly column is intended to give you food for thought, remembering “Any correction of the speech or writing of others will contain at least one grammatical, spelling or typographical error” (McKean’s Law, named after its inventor Erin McKean, editor of the Oxford American Dictionary). 

Monday, 17 February 2014

Ten-Minute Blog Break - 18th February

Turned out nice again, hasn't it?

Er, no. Not at all.

So my suggestion is to stay inside (ideally in a boat) and enjoy the best of this week's SCBWI blogs!


The weather might be awful in the UK, but in Cape Town it's hot. Or as Jane Heinrichs puts it, "So, so, so hot." Jane manages to blog about her sweltering summer without a trace of gloating and even a note of envy. She also gives us a charming watercolour animation of a little girl with more than a touch of the drama queen about her.

Love was in the air for Valentine's Day, and what better way to celebrate than with a list of romantic books? But wait a minute, romantic books for boys??? Head over to The Edge to read Dave Cousins's recommendations.

The life of a visiting author is nothing if not varied. Although not technically a blog post, I enjoyed Julie Fulton's update on her recent author visits, which took her from a nursery, to primary school and then to university! It seems that we never really grow out of loving a good picture book.

Someone who definitely loves picture books with a passion is Norinder Jones, Senior Book Designer at Little Tiger Press. If you've ever wondered what a picture book designer actually does all day, I'd suggest you hightail it over to Big Little Tales, where Loretta Shauer interviews Norinder about their work together.

Finally, here's something a little different. It takes great courage to put your own fiction writing online for others to read - especially when your readers are all authors as well! It's fitting then, that K.M Lockwood's "fairy story for writers" The Blind Seamstress is a tale about courage and finding your voice. Read parts one, two and three.

Nick.


Nick Cross is a children's writer, blogger and all-round techno-ninja. In 2010 he was a winner of Undiscovered Voices with his zombie comedy Back from the Dead and currently writes short fiction for Stew Magazine, an event that was recently celebrated on this site.